Great blog Maria! I really enjoyed your inventiveness with this!
I think you should consider your word choice through implementing textual or directive words in order to evoke energy and interest from the reader. For example you said; “taps into them”, consider, “engages the audiences’ soul”, this is captivating and clear. Similarly, there are instances where you need to work on your clarity, for example, “develop meaning for” and “you yourself” it is repetitive and thus creates confusion.
For a poet like Ezra Pound, who is very in touch with other intellectuals and his context perhaps another rule could be to “32. Take into consideration your context and the movements of values and perspectives, as well as, the occurrence of events at the time. Can they be manipulated and / or reflected within your writing?”
Keep it up!
An outstanding peer review Victoria in its close attention to detail. Thank you for your consistency with this.
MG
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