Category Archives: Peer Reviews

Great blog Maria! I really enjoyed your inventiveness with this!  I think you should consider your word choice through implementing textual or directive words in order to evoke energy and interest from the reader. For example you said; “taps into them”, consider, “engages the audiences’ soul”, this is captivating and clear. Similarly, there are instancesContinue reading “Peer Review #4”

Du Bois African American Literature. Nice work Bella! You have effectively explained how Du Bois identified the colour line. Your explanation is comprehensive, however, I would love to hear about whether you think the issues of the “colour line” are still present today? In the context of American western society today, there are still issuesContinue reading “Peer review #3”

Lovely words! the excerpt you picked out is one of my favourites as well. Perhaps, the reflection on the source can be more directive, you list a lot of terms using commas, however, expanding on these ideas and romanticising them would be a pleasure to read and relate to the theme of your piece nicely.Continue reading “Peer Review #2”

Reflection from Joey’s blog about modernism! Thanks Joey for a really exciting piece! Your rhetorical question is something I consider often, what is the next ‘thing’ in literature and how will it impact our lives? Will it be the consequence of a morbid WW3?Or Will the increase of anxiety in society finally seek an outletContinue reading “Peer Review #1”